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You'd be surprised
To find
The nicks and crannies of your mind
The darkened places that you hide
The shattered pieces deep inside
So very distant from the light
Can be revived

When you begin again
Eyes bright and new
Cleanse the lies
until there's only truth
Surrender to the servitude
That sets us free, eternally
As the many arise from the few
So we can go back to the beginning
and finally start living
Like You
Okay so here's another one refurbished and edited from a set of old song lyrics. All I'm gonna say is if this isn't your type of thing then first, why are you reading it? and second please don't comment on the subject of the poem then. I can take constructive criticism but as the old saying goes if you don't have something nice to say don't say anything. I'm probably WAY overreacting on all this but I figured why not get it out of the way so I can relax later when I post other poems with similar subjects.
Anyways that set aside I hope you enjoy!

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AM I THE ONLY ONE HERE WHO THOUGHT OF DOCTOR WHO WHILE READING THIS?????!!!!